There was a house on the hill. It was a run-down old thing, with shingles fallen off the roof, and the door halfway off its hinges. The windows were all boarded up, except for one round window at the top of the house. In front, there was what used to be a lawn. Over the years it had turned into an almost-meadow, high weeds and the occasional wild flowers growing wildly. Then there was the fence. It was tall and made of iron, and not one bit of it was rusted. The strangest thing was, there was no gate. Nobody remembered that there’d ever been one. It was as if someone had left the house to rot and built a fence around it afterwards.
The Hensley brothers sat with their backs against one of the big oak trees that kept their own house separate from the hill behind it.
“You think anyone’s ever been in there?” asked Tommy. He was ten, and his pajamas featured a pattern of Pokemon creatures.
“What, you mean like mom or dad or the kids at school?” answered Jake. He was barely six, and his world view encompassed only those people he knew. He was unfortunate enough to have his mom still picking out his clothing, and his pajamas featured multicolored, grinning bunnies.
“No, stupid, I mean anybody. Anybody in town. One of the older kids or the cops or someone.”
“But how? There’s no way to get in!”
“Bet I can figure out a way.” He got up and yanked Jake up off the ground.
“Tommy? Tommy, we’re not going up there, are we?” Jake’s hand was held so tightly that he was stumbling after his brother trying to keep up and not fall and be dragged on the ground. Tommy marched resolutely upwards, and when Jake started getting breathless, he picked him up gingerly and brought him the rest of the way. He stopped at the tall fence and plopped Jake onto the ground.
“Stop sniveling, Jakey! Look, we could make this place into a club-house, right?”
Jake looked up hopefully, wiping his dribbling nose with the pack of one muddied hand. “Could we? Could we really? With secret meetings and stuff?”
“You bet. Now, all we have to do is this. Look, you see my hands? They’re like a step now, right? So step on, and I’ll lift you as high as I can so you catch onto the top.”
Jake scrambled onto his brother’s cupped hands and held onto the fence rails as he was raised slowly up to the top. He reached out an arm, and caught hold of the one of the raised spiky bits with one little hand. Tommy saw this, gave a whoop and let go of Jake’s feet.
A moment later, there was a crumpled Jake on the floor clutching his leg and a very white Tommy sitting next to him. His mind was very focused on two things at the same time. The first was that he had to get Jake back home quickly because that leg was definitely broken, and the second was how was he going to explain this to Mom??
It was years before either brother went up that hill again.
What fun! I loved the descriptions and the immediate interest in characters. 🙂
I liked that u showed what happened instead of just telling us. Nice job!
Poor Jake! =[ I feel bad for him. I’d like to see this piece go somewhere, though! What’s the significance of the house?
… And how did their mom react? XD
Awwww… Poor kid! You gave the boys such great voices; you really nailed the dialogue of their ages. Is sniveling a word a 10 year old would know though?
I want to know more about that house though and why the boys decide to go back years later. Great premise here! I’d love to see more!
I love the description of the house! And ahh, boys and their shenanigans XD
There is usually only three endings to any story no matter the length. They are a realization (epiphany), a change in direction and a summation. This is a summation and it’s very nicely done. Good work.
This was very nice, full of promise and adventure but just the right ending for a short-short. kudos.
I have to agree with Ray…as I read… I felt a sense of an inpending adventure…but you gave us the perfect ending for this short short…well done!
And now I’m sitting here, anxiously waiting to hear how Mom reacted! Loved this post!