There was no reason in the world for them to meet that night. If anyone wants to prove the existence of Fate or God, they might use this example in their studies.
She was supposed to be on her way to London from Wiltshire, but the taxi she was taking (her father had given her the cash for it, she could never have afforded such an extravagant means of travel on her salary) broke down unexpectedly.
He was supposed to be halfway to America, but his sister called, hysterical, just as he was checking in at the Delta desk at Heathrow Airport. She was having her baby early, and her husband was abroad on business. When he told his sister that he was about to fly away as well, she screamed at him in no uncertain terms, and scared him so much that he decided it would be a good idea to get his butt to the hospital, pronto.
They met in a pub around the corner from the private hospital where his sister was having her baby, and where her taxi had broken down. They both sat alone at the bar, and it was only when she ordered her drink (“White Russian, and put in as much ice as you’ve got, I’m parched.”) that he realized she was there. He had the same drink in front of him, looking just as full as it had when he’d gotten it, because of the profusion of ice-cubes which had begun to melt as he drank it down.
“You’re having what I’m having.”
“No, no, you don’t get it. Nobody likes extra ice in their White Russian. I had a friend swear to disown me if I let him see me order it like this again.”
“No, listen, I’m not drunk, my sister is having a baby, I’m just tired – okay, right, sorry, I’m babbling, enjoy your drink.”
“Your sister is having a baby? Over at the hospital?”
“My dad owns that place.”
“So I should complain to you if something goes wrong?”
“He hasn’t seen the place in ten years. He just owns it. Sorry.”
“Interesting. Owning something and not knowing anything about it.”
“Pretty much like all our internal organs, you mean?”
“Never thought about it that way.”
“That’s okay. Most people don’t.”
8 thoughts on “Chance [Flash Fiction]”
please continue this piece, i love it so far, i want to know what happens
Thanks, Chloe! I didn’t feel this was one of my best, so it’s nice to know you liked it :).
So cute! =]
PS, eeew, internal organs. I don’t want to know anything about mine. XD
Hehehe, yeah, me neither. The only reason I can watch the squiggly internal-organ stuff on “House” is because I know they’re all made of rubber and corn-syrup :P.
Adorable. Featuring two tings I love: chance meetings and the UK. Oh and your writing style of course 😉
And I agree with Chloe. It leaves me hanging and you set it up so nicely that I feel it could be carried farther.
Thank you :D. I love the UK, too – SO MUCH.
What a great topic for flash fiction!
Thank you so much!