The trembling in the barman’s fingers was noticeable when he brought the next round of drinks to their table. Tabby, the tall brunette who had been eyeing him up all night, spoke up.
“Hey man, you okay?”
“What?” He set down her drink, sloshing some of the brightly colored liquid out onto the table, distracted by the question more than by his hands.
“Your hands. They’re shaking. Everything alright?”
“Of course,” he said, fixing a grin on his face. “Sorry about that,” he pointed to the spilled drink, “I’ll get a rag. Just a sec.” He hurried back to the bar, and Tabby turned to her girlfriends.
“Something’s not right with that guy.”
“Shut up, Tabby, you’re drunk. Also, you’re a fixer.” Joanna was big-boned but lanky, and she was the drunkest of them all at that particular moment. She didn’t notice the way her words were slurring together or how her eyelids were already drooping a little.
Tabby rolled her eyes at Kate and Gina. “If I’m drunk, then you’re a lobster,” she muttered under her breath. Joanna didn’t hear her. She was digging in her wallet for a couple quarters for the old-fashioned jukebox in the corner. “No, but seriously,” Tabby continued. “He’s shaking.”
“I didn’t notice,” Gina said. She shrugged, a dramatic feat that caused her to immediately hitch up her shirt so that nothing would spill out. Kate wasn’t listening to any of them; she had her face buried in her phone and was alternately typing and staring intensely at the screen as if it would grant all her wishes. Tabby raised her eyebrows at Gina and gave Kate a pointed look. Gina rolled her eyes and mouthed “They’re fighting again.”
Some girls’ night out this turned out to be, Tabby thought. Joanna’s drunk already and is going to fall asleep in five minutes, Kate’s having the same old relationship issues as always, Gina is in one of her quiet moods and I’m still stone-cold sober. And worrying about a barman who I’ve never met before.
The barman came back with a rag and wiped the spill. His hands were still shaking. Tabby stared after him. She hoped he was okay.
You amaze me…you can take mere observations in life, in people, and weave a story around them-I tell you ONE DAY I WILL HOLD YOUR NOVEL IN MY HANDS; I JUST KNOW IT. Don’t EVER stop writing because some day, you WILL be a famous author!
Aw, Suzi… Thank you so much for believing me like this. It means so much!
Is there a follow up? Your writing style is intriguing, very interesting how little details can tell so much! I am looking forward to reading more!
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Thank you very much! I don’t know if I’ll continue this. This is just another idea that I had and decided to write down :).